I am a Year 8 learner in Room 5 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
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Wednesday, 27 May 2015
Tuesday, 12 May 2015
Creative paragraphs- man in space
This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence. Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.
A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milky way. He is looking for aliens in space. When he gets out of his space ship he see’s difference kind of planets.
A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milky way. He is looking for aliens in space. When he gets out of his space ship he see’s difference kind of planets.

