Advice Column

 WALT: Use prior knowledge with information from the text to help our understanding

WALT: Identify the problem and offer appropriate advice

Problem Solving week 10

 
WALT: use multiplication problems we know to work out trickier problems.WALT: solve problems which include a mix of addition, subtraction, multiplication, and division.

Problem Solving week 6

Walt: understand the relationship between multiplication, division, and repeated addition. For example, 4x5=20; 5+5+5+5=20; 20➗4=5. Walt: quickly answer multiplication facts for 2, 5, and 10 times tables.

Camping Dictagloss week 9

One day there was a boy named Sam. He was going out to camp in the deep  forest with his family. Sam was so excited but his sisters Kelly and  Angela weren't in the mood for camping .

They set up their tents by the trees and by the rivers. When they were almost done setting up their tents it was almost dark. Sam was scared so he stood by his dad.

Suddenly he heard a roaring noise Sam asked his dad “did you hear that?” they went looking for the roaring sound it was a ginormous bear. They ran as fast as they could, then they got lost in the middle of nowhere.

They tried finding their way back home they were starving for food. When Sam and his dad saw a  man with some bread and milk they asked him “excuse me” may we have  some food of yours

please?”  yes you may said the man.

They introduced themselves before the man gave them some milk and bread then sam and his father went back home and they shared the bread and milk then they all lived happily ever after The end.

WALT: narrate a story that involves a boy, camping and a family that needs food

Dictagloss week 6

Once upon there was a dragon named Zack. He was play on the forest with his brother when another dragon came along,  what are you two doing he asked we’re playing knights they replied. do you want to play to?

WALT: Edit a paragraph and insert punctuation marks in the right places

Dictagloss week 6

Zack was ecstatic but also curious what was a knight shining Armor doing out in the middle of the forest.Nettalon wanting  to play with dragon’s didn’t .he know they were meant to be Enemies after all.surely he was up to something and it was up to Zack to find out this knight ourtiriour motick.

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

WILF: I can write down the sounds in words I hear and I can punctuate my writing

Pirate Treasure

Once upon a time lived a Pirate named Roger. He was a hero to the people because every new year he would bring treasure

to his people and shared It.With others but then roger stopped and think to himself that this new year he will give the people no more treasure. but he had kept a promise to those people those people believed in

him. Then Roger set of hunting for treasure roger shouted there is an island with an old shipwreck . roger got of his ship and started looking for treasure. He saw an huge X   he went and got his shevled he started diging until he saw an box he was so suprise he shouted I found an treasure box . he sailed  to his people & said if I keep a promise then a promise it is. Then they said go captian Roger as they all shouted captian is captain forever The end.

WALT: narrate a story that involves a pirate, on an island and treasure is found

Easter show story

On easter Sunday I went to the easter show with my family. At the easter show there were heap’s & heap’s of people there. my family “and’’ i” Enjoyed   The slide, the Bumper cars, the spin around  ride, the Swinging boat, the jump cliff, and of course the Roller coaster.

I really had a Wonderful Easter Sunday So enjoyable the fireworks started at 9 : 30 pm. I had lot’s of candy floss and Ice cream, Hot chip’s too I went on too many ride’s cause we lot’s of tickets. Then we went to a store and got my brother a glowing stick. Then my brother sam was acting as a ninja turtle.  Then when the easter show finished the light’s all shut down then we waited for my mum then my mum came and my brother sam sneaked in the back of the boot. We stoped by at the Mc donald and had a frozen coke The end.

WALT: write a detailed recount about what you did during your Easter Break

WILF: (What I’m looking for)

Three detailed paragraphs: Introduction with Hook, Body, Conclusion

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