Dictagloss week 6

Once upon there was a dragon named Zack. He was play on the forest with his brother when another dragon came along,  what are you two doing he asked we’re playing knights they replied. do you want to play to?

WALT: Edit a paragraph and insert punctuation marks in the right places

Dictagloss week 6

Zack was ecstatic but also curious what was a knight shining Armor doing out in the middle of the forest.Nettalon wanting  to play with dragon’s didn’t .he know they were meant to be Enemies after all.surely he was up to something and it was up to Zack to find out this knight ourtiriour motick.

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

WILF: I can write down the sounds in words I hear and I can punctuate my writing

Pirate Treasure

Once upon a time lived a Pirate named Roger. He was a hero to the people because every new year he would bring treasure

to his people and shared It.With others but then roger stopped and think to himself that this new year he will give the people no more treasure. but he had kept a promise to those people those people believed in

him. Then Roger set of hunting for treasure roger shouted there is an island with an old shipwreck . roger got of his ship and started looking for treasure. He saw an huge X   he went and got his shevled he started diging until he saw an box he was so suprise he shouted I found an treasure box . he sailed  to his people & said if I keep a promise then a promise it is. Then they said go captian Roger as they all shouted captian is captain forever The end.

WALT: narrate a story that involves a pirate, on an island and treasure is found

Easter show story

On easter Sunday I went to the easter show with my family. At the easter show there were heap’s & heap’s of people there. my family “and’’ i” Enjoyed   The slide, the Bumper cars, the spin around  ride, the Swinging boat, the jump cliff, and of course the Roller coaster.

I really had a Wonderful Easter Sunday So enjoyable the fireworks started at 9 : 30 pm. I had lot’s of candy floss and Ice cream, Hot chip’s too I went on too many ride’s cause we lot’s of tickets. Then we went to a store and got my brother a glowing stick. Then my brother sam was acting as a ninja turtle.  Then when the easter show finished the light’s all shut down then we waited for my mum then my mum came and my brother sam sneaked in the back of the boot. We stoped by at the Mc donald and had a frozen coke The end.

WALT: write a detailed recount about what you did during your Easter Break

WILF: (What I’m looking for)

Three detailed paragraphs: Introduction with Hook, Body, Conclusion

More Information, More Explanation, More Description

Addition/ Subtraction Where am I at

Walt: demonstrate our knowledge so far of addition and subtraction Walt: demonstrate our prior knowledge of our times tables.

Sir edmund hillary

WALT: Use relevant parts of the text to help us answer questions

WALT: Use cues and prior knowledge to help us understand new words

The speacial ride

Answer the following questions:

1. Explain (1 sentence) what a ‘bike track’ is- A bike track is an track that is bumpy or clean and nothing to make them trip over.

2. Why did they ride their bikes in single file along the track?- Abby and nick rided there bike’s with aunty kath because aunty kath was taking them to the pinic spot.

3. Explain where their track started and finished-There track bike ride was a suprise for nick and Abby and then they came to this clifed it was steep then Aunty kath told them look down nick and abby were so suprised then Aunty kath told them to go and slide down on the flying fox.

4. List three main ideas that you have read so far- They had a picnic it was a suprise for nick and abby then they came to this flying fox that there Aunty and uncle made for them to come down because it was so steep and a bit slipery.

WALT: Identify the main ideas in the story