I am a Year 8 learner in Room 5 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
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Thursday, 26 May 2016
Personification Dictagloss
The moon danced upon the ocean as if on a spot lighted stage. the tired old shoe s felt loneson at the back of the closet. the cellphone alarm screamed and Hollerd at me until I finally rolled out of bed.
You are trying really hard to listen and write down what is being dictated, Maree. Remember to put capital letters and fullstops in the right places.
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