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when it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was really rare because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush
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when it was our last day camping out in the bush. My friends and I ’discovered there was a bush that was really rare because it wasn’t that much bushes around it. Actually it was a huge forest it looked so amazing. It had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it just looked like a stinky old bush.
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