What is school?
Introduction :
School is a place where children go to get a good Education. In New Zealand children
from ages 5 - 10 yrs are in primary school , Then ages 11 - 13 is Intermediate.
Then ages 13 - 18 is High School and then you enter University . NZ Law States
say that children must attend school / High school from Monday - Friday ...
Body Paragraph - 1 : What Do Students learn here at school?
Here at school we learn Numeracy , Literacy , Technology and others too. These are the main
subjects students learn about in school. In Numeracy we learn how to count , Subtract ,
Multiply and Addition. In Reading we learn how to pronounce words sound it out and
meaning of that word. In Writing we write all sorts of different types to make it more
interesting.
subjects students learn about in school. In Numeracy we learn how to count , Subtract ,
Multiply and Addition. In Reading we learn how to pronounce words sound it out and
meaning of that word. In Writing we write all sorts of different types to make it more
interesting.
Body Paragraph - 2 : What is Friendship ?
Friendship is something that is hard and easy for some Students . Friendship is hard
because not all students fit in because the get bullied , Mocked and Frighten at most
times. Friendship is easy for Students that act Cool , Think there Tough and like to show off.
because not all students fit in because the get bullied , Mocked and Frighten at most
times. Friendship is easy for Students that act Cool , Think there Tough and like to show off.
At school when your with a lot of Friends you start to show of and back stab people and
even snob friends your close with. What i mean by snob your friends is when you know
there close to you and they say hi to you you just snob them. Because you are showing
off and because you’re trying to fit in with the others .
even snob friends your close with. What i mean by snob your friends is when you know
there close to you and they say hi to you you just snob them. Because you are showing
off and because you’re trying to fit in with the others .
Friendship is something important especially in your own life , You have to be secure
and sure that your Friends are trustworthy and that they trust you
and sure that your Friends are trustworthy and that they trust you
and you trust them too .
Body Paragraph - 3 : What is Technology?
Technology is where you go and learn about different subjects like Robotics ,
Cooking and more . Did you know that it is important to use devices like
Chrome books, I macs , I pads and many more.
Some Schools are very lucky
because they have devices and all that sort of stuff, but other schools don’t
have devices they use scrap books and pencils to do writing. They also use
normal books that have there reading text for there task to read. Other schools
that have devices read online books and complete there Reading task that is online...
Cooking and more . Did you know that it is important to use devices like
Chrome books, I macs , I pads and many more.
Some Schools are very lucky
because they have devices and all that sort of stuff, but other schools don’t
have devices they use scrap books and pencils to do writing. They also use
normal books that have there reading text for there task to read. Other schools
that have devices read online books and complete there Reading task that is online...
Conclusion :
So that’s what school is really all about. Don’t change yourself just
because you wanna fit in with all the other cool girls.Friendship is Important
and make sure that you trust your friends and that they trust you too .
and make sure that you trust your friends and that they trust you too .
Advice : Make sure you’re not bullying others and be responsible for your own acts...
Hi Maree,
ReplyDeleteI can clearly see that you can follow the structure of an information report and you used one idea per paragraph. Your next step is to work on using academic language - imagine if we were talking or writing to Mr Burt - this is the language that we will work on using in our essays.