I am a Year 8 learner in Room 5 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
Wednesday, 27 May 2015
Tuesday, 12 May 2015
Creative paragraphs- man in space
This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence. Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.
A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milky way. He is looking for aliens in space. When he gets out of his space ship he see’s difference kind of planets.
A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milky way. He is looking for aliens in space. When he gets out of his space ship he see’s difference kind of planets.
Wednesday, 6 May 2015
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