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when it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was really rare because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush
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when it was our last day camping out in the bush. My friends and I ’discovered there was a bush that was really rare because it wasn’t that much bushes around it. Actually it was a huge forest it looked so amazing. It had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it just looked like a stinky old bush.
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One day there was a little girl who went camping with her family.
Her name was Anduirana she went camping with her parent’s and her brother’s. Anduirana was the only sister her brother’s name’s was lance, jack and Jill were twin brother’s.
Anduirana was helping her parent’s set up there tent’s while Anduirana was helping her parent’s. Jack and Jill were playing soccer and they were running around Lance was reading his book’s that he brought from home
Anduirana finished setting up the tent’s with her parent’s.
So her Parent’s decided that they will have smores and hot chocolate for tonight. After there Dinner they went to sleep it was cold when they went to sleep, that night while they were sleeping along came to hunter’s they found food it was Anduirana and her family’s food.
One cold morning there was a girl who loved to go walking in the bush
So she asked her parent’s if she could go for a walk with her sister’s and her one and only brother.
They went for a quick walk and they also went for a run it was amazing! When they got home they had some fruit’s and they had vegetable’s with some salad then they went to sleep.
They went outside but there brother was gone so they went looking for him they first check the bush second they checked his room then they checked his friends house they still didn't find him so they told there parent’s then dad said everyone come on let’s go look for him.
Mum was so so worried but couldn't find him any where at all they went to the police house and they asked the police if they can help. So the police said yes of course I can help so they went and they found him he was in the bush hidden by some boy’s from his school.
His mouth was rapped with tape and they tied the rope around his hand’s so they took the rope of his hand’s and they went to the hospital and said if they can take a look if his blood is alright but when the nurse came out she told us he is dead because his blood was stopped the nurse said the rope was tied tight on his hands they were really sad when they got home.
But they still enjoyed the rest of there days and dad said to the sister’s to stay home be safe and never ever go walking in the bush so the girls were told to never ever go near the bush. So they lived safe and took care for each other Mum said next time let’s make sure we walking all together girl OK Mum.