Tuesday, 12 May 2015

Creative paragraphs- man in space

This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence. Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.

A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milky way. He is looking for aliens in space. When he gets out of his  space ship  he see’s difference kind of planets.

Wednesday, 6 May 2015

All About Technology

In Reading we have been learning about technology. Technology is when you design something to fix a problem. This is my presentation about technology.