I am a Year 8 learner in Room 5 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
Wednesday, 24 October 2018
Michelangelo Research
Today I and a class of student's we are learning and doing some researches about Michelangelo di Lodovico Buonarroti Simoni.
First Day Of 2018
First Day Of 2018
Malo e lelei my name is Maree and I am a year seven at pt england school in a
# new class and a different year. I’m starting to walk into my new classroom I’m
began to Wow!!! In my head this is amazing but really on my first day I was really
shy well I wasn’t the only person shy anyways being a senior to me thought it
would be hard but actually it was fine it was normal.
# new class and a different year. I’m starting to walk into my new classroom I’m
began to Wow!!! In my head this is amazing but really on my first day I was really
shy well I wasn’t the only person shy anyways being a senior to me thought it
would be hard but actually it was fine it was normal.
What I enjoyed about my first day of school was meeting the teachers and getting
to know more people.
to know more people.
Because I Said So ?
Because I Said So?
WALT: justify our ideas using conjunctions.
I strongly believe that we need school uniform. Why I
believe that we should wear uniform because it is showing
your school pride and it is important to wear your school
uniform cause it makes you look smart in uniform.
Uniform is good te wear because people will know what
school you go to, and it also is good for when other parents
see you in your uniform and they will think that you look
smart in your school uniform and they will want there
children to look smart in uniform to so if you want to look
smart then dress up in your school uniform.
believe that we should wear uniform because it is showing
your school pride and it is important to wear your school
uniform cause it makes you look smart in uniform.
Uniform is good te wear because people will know what
school you go to, and it also is good for when other parents
see you in your uniform and they will think that you look
smart in your school uniform and they will want there
children to look smart in uniform to so if you want to look
smart then dress up in your school uniform.
Chocolate Exemplar !
Whittaker’s Chocolate - Maree Ve’ehala
There’s something in this sweet brown block that has amused humans for centuries. The way the
chocolate slowly disintegrates on the tip of your tongue. The way the almonds crackle and crunch
under your teeth… Once you open the wrapper, the exquisite aroma slowly enters your nose, making
it harder to resist until you hear the sound of crunching.
chocolate slowly disintegrates on the tip of your tongue. The way the almonds crackle and crunch
under your teeth… Once you open the wrapper, the exquisite aroma slowly enters your nose, making
it harder to resist until you hear the sound of crunching.
Slabs of silky chocolate layers flow like a chocolate river in your mouth. It’s soft, sweet but balanced
flavour will leave you hungry for more, but you will not regret your decision to take another bite!
flavour will leave you hungry for more, but you will not regret your decision to take another bite!
This Whittakers chocolate has been around since 1896, spreading joy all over the world and
sweetening little minds. Whittaker’s do all they can to give joy to their customers; our business
is spreading the love of chocolate with the world.
sweetening little minds. Whittaker’s do all they can to give joy to their customers; our business
is spreading the love of chocolate with the world.
What words do you like from this piece of writing? My word that I like on this piece of writing is
disintegrates because I’ve never heard that word in my entire life!!!
disintegrates because I’ve never heard that word in my entire life!!!
What has the author done to make the writing seem more interesting? The author has made this
piece of writing interesting by talking about whittakers chocolate and is telling us how the whittaker's
chocolate tastes on your tongue and the sounds of the crunch when you are eating the whittakers
chocolate.
piece of writing interesting by talking about whittakers chocolate and is telling us how the whittaker's
chocolate tastes on your tongue and the sounds of the crunch when you are eating the whittakers
chocolate.
What descriptive language has the author used? The author has used a very interesting language of
or for this piece of writing it’s just amazing.
or for this piece of writing it’s just amazing.
What facts has the author used? The author has used facts about the chocolate, facts about the crunch
and sounds and even the tastes of whittakers chocolate on your tongue.
and sounds and even the tastes of whittakers chocolate on your tongue.
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